Laying and sleeping, back on floor.
The most comfortable thing since you were thrown out the door.
The dreams are blurred, but you see well.
A man taking the soul you want to sell.
Daisies and sunshine, but dark and gloomy.
.
No light, no soul.
Just a dark whole.
Help can no longer find you.
It wanted you.
I gave up, and it's all because of you.
No light, no soul.
ReplyDeleteJust a dark whole.
Absolutely BRILLIANT!
Beautiful.
Oh why,, thank you!!!!
ReplyDeleteJust my feelings,, those damn feelings :)
Let's talk!!!! I just read your :Ashes To Ashes, absolutely b e a u t i f u l!
i know it probably wasnt your intention but it almost reminded me of a hooker.. like their soul is being taken but they are selling it but theres no way out, i know its not how you meant it, but it worked really well, and i LOVED it[[: ps its fat smiley [[:
ReplyDelete-Tay
Oh,, that is something I never thought of! But
ReplyDeleteI actually like that idea haha :]] I like the fat smily!