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Tuesday, September 21, 2010

The Happiest Nightmare.

Laying and sleeping, back on floor.
The most comfortable thing since you were thrown out the door.

The dreams are blurred, but you see well.
A man taking the soul you want to sell.

Daisies and sunshine, but dark and gloomy.
.

No light, no soul.
Just a dark whole.

Help can no longer find you.
It wanted you.
I gave up, and it's all because of you.

4 comments:

  1. No light, no soul.
    Just a dark whole.

    Absolutely BRILLIANT!

    Beautiful.

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  2. Oh why,, thank you!!!!
    Just my feelings,, those damn feelings :)
    Let's talk!!!! I just read your :Ashes To Ashes, absolutely b e a u t i f u l!

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  3. i know it probably wasnt your intention but it almost reminded me of a hooker.. like their soul is being taken but they are selling it but theres no way out, i know its not how you meant it, but it worked really well, and i LOVED it[[: ps its fat smiley [[:
    -Tay

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  4. Oh,, that is something I never thought of! But
    I actually like that idea haha :]] I like the fat smily!

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